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+Breakdown+ Extra 1 by AnaKris +Breakdown+ Extra 1 by AnaKris
Spanish version:: [link]

Well, I decided to do this extra chapter between part B and C, in order to know a little about Haru's life after Kotomi left (so no yuri moments here xD)

This was thought to be a funny thing, but I ended up adding some drama, I couldn't help it, I'm a dramatic person :B
anyway, I hope you enjoy it : )

I'm already starting to work on part C, so I guess there will be more pages soon~


And as always, thanks to ~co426e for the translation correction :heart:




Cross Heart/Someday/Breakdown © *AnaKris
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Given 2011-06-18
+Breakdown+ Extra 1 by *AnaKris

The suggester says: "This is a wonderful set of pages that tell part of a beautiful story. There's a very professional look to this manga, specially when it comes to the inking and panel layout, which definitely show the great expressions the author puts on every character." ( Suggested by javeman and Featured by Nyiana-sama )
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NorthernDruid Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
I agree with Haru, Anakris needs to make a chapter detailing Haru's backgrounds!
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Kradth Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
ooh nice! haha.. I've read this after the ending so now I know what was that 'pay back for' hahaha :D
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himeko1999 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god, haru es adoptada , me gustaria un capitulo explicando eso xD , esta genial *-* , amo tu manga :33
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kirano-chan Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
kotomi's so cute!!! :iconsokawaiiplz:
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:iconvampireintherain:
vampireintherain Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Student Writer
why did she told her that D:? waaaah! D: but still precious noneless
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BCKThomas Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
I love this series, never had I read a manga that I can't pull my self away from
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10animallover10 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2011
Wow, she's not their real daughter? didn't see that one comming O.o now I really wnat to knowmore =P keep up the great work^^
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Lusterman Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
really professional...how did you learn how to do it?
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monkeys-at-play Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
what a funny ending
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:iconkadi-dote:
kadi-dote Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hig 5..great work
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Sound-Of-Soul Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
Oh these cuties.... ^///^
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:iconpofuchan:
PofuChan Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
IT'S SO AMAZING!! Oh my god I almost cried. ;3;
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Shiver-Slice Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Great comic but I admit at first I was so lost. I read it from left to right so was like ...."HUH?!" for a bit. XD I'm so not use to Mangas.
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NeuralNeutrality Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student General Artist
IT READS RIGHT TO LEFT
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IN ENGLISH
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Kare-Valgon Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Filmographer
WOW ! ana felicidades por la DD ! es magnifico ! realmente la mereces :love:
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:iconanakris:
AnaKris Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Muchas gracias! ;w; *emocionada*
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:iconkare-valgon:
Kare-Valgon Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Filmographer
totalmente meresido ana ! x3 disfrutalo ! pronto tendras otras x3
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xcarbonx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
I'm floored by how incredible that was. Never did I think I was going to get such depth in a short strip.
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Miragician Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice shojo manga! Your work looks very professional, and I hope a publisher finds you and gets this in print! Keep up the good work!

Thumbs up for Haru breaking the fourth wall.
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TraficJam Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Congrats on the DD! Im really glad you recieved it because its been so long sence ive read any manga and your story made me miss it :)
lovely work! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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Hachi-Fusami Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Manga! Now I need to read the rest...Congrads on the DD!
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DeadloveCalling Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Writer
aww this is beautiful. This looks so professional too! I love the story line also
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MusingStar Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Very nice piece. It's the first comic page I've read of yours, so I was reading left to right before I realized in the marriage panel that i should be reading right to left, and then the dialogue made sense. Good job!
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Scooperchan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
This was so cute- I love the "married" panel :D
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Zimeta Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice paneling. :)
All your characters have the same face and body shapes, though. You might want to work on that because it's hard to tell one person from another.
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PlottingYourDemise Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I don't even like yuri, but I'm willing to read this from start to finish (the whole comic)~
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Starfire283 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Yuri doesn't mean girlxgirl relationship exactly, it means girlxgirl sexual intercourse I believe. c:
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:iconplottingyourdemise:
PlottingYourDemise Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Close enough. So technically, it's shoujo-ai, then?
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:iconstarfire283:
Starfire283 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Yup. c:
Or you could just say "lesbian relationship" but that's no fun. XD
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:iconplottingyourdemise:
PlottingYourDemise Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I guess not XD
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the-lostartistictype Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing! im not that into yuri, but this makes me want to read more!!! you totally deserve this DD
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Iluq Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SHE BROKE THE FOURTH WALL.
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Judea1 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol excellent artwork and storyline. =)
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ceure Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
MAI WAIFU.
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broomstick88 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's beutiful but i have no idea whats going on
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AnaKris Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, you'll have to read the entire comic to understand it better. This is just an extra chapter : )

You can read the pages here: [link]
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broomstick88 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you
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Neylouchka Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Good Job ! I enjoyed it :w00t:
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SamalaKatal Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this, it's very cute and professional looking. :aww:
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Birdie121 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't really care for yuri, but despite that, this is a great comic. The artwork is pretty good, although the anatomy could be better at some points. It does seem like an interesting story is unfolding. So good job, congrats on the DD!
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23-ZiZ-23 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
gaaaaaaw howa dorable aXD
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kobatohanato96 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Digital Artist
oh~ so its yuri... >< i'm not a fan of it, but the artwork is so cute! ><
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Nx3Fox Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Filmographer
Good advices made.

Nice work!
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Kluste Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hola! Tengo que decir que (me he leído la versión en español...) me ha sorprendido encontrar en devianar un trabajo como este. Es muy poco común ver manga con una apariencia tan profesional, la colocación de las viñetas y de los bocadillos, wow! y las tramas, geniales oye
sigue así que vas por el buen camino :thumbsup:

(pd: y ya como curiosidad, me queda preguntarte los años que tienes =P)
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AnaKris Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Muchas gracias! me alegra que te haya gustado <3

Y respondiendo a tu pregunta... tengo 20 años xD
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Kluste Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pues para ser tan joven tienes un gran talento!! :aww:
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CapelliDiPaglia Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
....it's horrible....(no offence)
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taira-kurasshu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
I hope you don't mind me being one amongst many replying to you, but sir, that is a flame. If there is something wrong with the art or you don't understand the plot, do some analysis and give her some feedback on what to improve on. You know a critique. Calling something horrible without reason is offensive.
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AnaKris Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
If you don't have something intelligent to tell, I don't understand why you bother commenting here : )
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Shizuku-no-Mizu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
detto da uno che copia lo stile di naruto senza svilupparne uno proprio mi sembra un commento poco rilevante... pensa a te stesso prima di giudicare gli altri.. soprattutto se devi criticare gratuitamente senza spiegare cos'è che ti ha fatto avere qell'opinione
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